The Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that controlling one's mind can influence the results. Everyone knows that calming down one's mind can influence the results.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

http://journals.lww.com/joem/Abstract/2000/09000/Work_Ability,_Physical_Activity,_and.12.aspx
 - It Explains that an adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability. We can infer that physical activity can bring better results when we make adequate level of physical activity by controlling one's mind or concentration.



http://chemwiki.ucdavis.edu/Physical_Chemistry/Kinetics/Rate_Laws/Reaction_Mechanisms/Reaction_Mechanisms/The_Effect_of_Concentration_on_Rate_of_Reaction#Contributors

 - It explains that the same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater. Thus, if we concentrate more, we can get advanced physical abilities.

 

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

 controlling one's mind and condition and calming down one's mind during sport games or physical activity is very important part. Because that behaviors can enhance physical ability so they can get better scores. Also through these behaviors, they can control their mind stable.



 

 

 Controlling one's mind or calming down one's mind can influence the results about sport games or physical activities. According to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's study, Concentration can bring advanced result rate. The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater.
 Also, an adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability. We can know that physical activity can bring better results when we make adequate level of physical activity by controlling one's mind or concentration. Actually according to my survey from 50 students, 42 of 05 students feel that their physical ablity is advanced or have better records when they control their mind and concentrate more.
 From these we can know that controlling one's mind and condition and calming down one's mind during sport games or physical activity is very important part. Because that behaviors can enhance physical ability so they can get better scores. Also through these behaviors, they can control their mind stable.