Introduction

 Everyone who lives in the earth, may be interested in well-being and health. Also they may have concerned with physical ability and physical activity. Naturally, people are interested in how to enhance physical ability and have advanced result. Especially, in sport games, players have to enhance their physical ability and make better score. There are many ways to improve better records, but I think concentration and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced score and enhanced physical ability. Before starting, you should know the definition of word, "concentration".  Concentration on something involves giving all your attention to one thing. In other words, spend all of your concerns to it. Calming down one's mind is acting like control one's condition, state.

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by definite the meaning of the concentration and people phycology about their physical activity. Also I confine the article in sports, physical activities.

2. Explains the topic -
In the attention grabber I introduce all the elements of my topic: Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result?" is my current topic

3. My thesis -
It is clear, direct and an argument. I thought the argument "Concentration can influence the results during sports games" was too simple and nobody would have interest it. I changed it to a better argument, Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result?" is my current topic