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"Controlling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result?"
Everyone who lives in the earth and all of them, may be interested in well-being and their health. Also they may concern physical ability and physical activity everyday. Naturally, people are interested in how to enhance their physical ability and how to get advanced result in every activities. Especially, in sports games, players have to enhance their physical ability to make a better score. Then they have to do special things that can bring physical advance. Although there are many ways to improve their results, I think a concentration and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced score and enhanced physical ability the most than anything. Before starting, you should know the definition of a word, "concentration". Concentration on something involves giving all your attention to one thing. In other words, spend all of your concerns to it. Calming down one's mind is acting like control one's condition and state. Now, I'll tell you a article "Controlling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result?". I agree this article and I'll give you some reasons through many evidences that can prove my opinion.
I want to confine effect of concentration to physical activities. Controlling one's mind or calming down one's mind can influence the results of sport games or physical activities strongly. There is a experiment that prove that concentration can make advanced physical ability. According to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's study, Concentration can bring advanced and a better result. Let's figure out specifically. The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. These are true whether both particles are in solution or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater. Thus, naturally we can have advanced physical ability for getting a better result.
Likewise there is a experiment too. According to beverley high school, If you increase the concentration of the substrate in an enzyme controlled you will speed up the a chemical reaction. The reason for this is as follows: The substrate and the enzyme need to come into contact with each other for a reaction to proceed. When the two meet they join for a brief moment while the reaction is catalysed, before separating. If there are very few substrate particles in the solution, it will take time for them to bump into an enzyme molecule. Increasing the substrate concentration means the chance of the collision between a substrate molecule and the enzyme is increased also. A little like packing more people into a room. The more people there are the more people you would bump into. This does not increase indefinitely though. There comes a point when the enzyme is working as fast as it can. The time taken for the enzyme to catalyse the reaction when they come into contact with each other limits how fast it can go.Through this experiment, we can know effect of concentration or calming down one's mind.
Also, An adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability. We can know that physical activity can bring better results when we make adequate level of physical activity by controlling one's mind or concentration. Actually, according to my survey from 50 students, 42 of 50 students feel that their physical ablity is advanced or have better records when they control their mind and concentrate more in physical activities, like sport games.
Additionally, According to my case, when I play sports or do physical activities, I feel enhanced physical abilities and can have better scores when I calming down my mind and concentrate more than before in badminton, basketball, soccer, all of sports. So I search more in physical activities not especially in sports. Then, results are same. In every physical activities, I can get better score when i concentrate more.
From these we can know that controlling one's mind, condition and calming down one's mind during sport games or physical activity is very important things. That is because these behaviors can enhance physical ability and increase reaction rate, so they can get better scores. Also through these behaviors, they can control their mind stable.
I think Opponents who don't agree with my thoughts may say that a better result and concentration or calming down are not related. They will think that is just coincidence. However that is not realistic, just suggests. As I mentioned before, concentration causes a chemical reaction to enhance reaction rate more. These means that there are relations between concentration and advanced physical advance. Additionally, I think opponents will say that concentration is just one way of mental controlling and it is seemed that influence one's ability and results. However I think a concentration and calming down one's mind while sports game are the most important way to get better results. Although there are many ways, these are the most influential, powerful way. A chemical reaction and enzyme reaction in our body prove that.
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Until now, I mention about "Controlling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result". As I said, there are many evidences why I think like these. Our body knows it, we know ourselves, result of research prove it. These are enough to prove this argument. What are needed more? Especially in physical activities, concentration and calming down one's mind have very important role. These are the most effective, powerful ways to make advanced results and enhanced physical ability. Already, many sports players know this and use in many matches. If you do these properly, you can get benefits from these in physical activities. Concentration and calming down one's mind is related with our brain, and control brain. So brain can control our body and make our physical abilities enhanced. These are not just coincidence. These are the results of body and brain's interaction. Thus, If you control or calm down your mind(escape from exited condition), you can cause advanced result and enhanced physical abilities.
