Second draft

Second Draft 

 

 

 Everyone who lives in the earth and all of them may be interested in well-being and health. Also they may concern physical ability and physical activity everyday. Naturally, people are interested in how to enhance physical ability and how to have advanced result. Especially, in sport games, players have to enhance their physical ability and make better score. Then they have to do special things that can bring physical advance. There are many ways to improve better records, but I think concentration and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced score and enhanced physical ability the most. Before starting, you should know the definition of word, "concentration". Concentration on something involves giving all your attention to one thing. In other words, spend all of your concerns to it. Calming down one's mind is acting like control one's condition, state.  

  Controlling one's mind or calming down one's mind can influence the results about sport games or physical activities. There is a experiment that prove that concentration can make advanced physical ability. According to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's study, Concentration can bring advanced result rate. The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater.  

  Likewise, According to beverley high school, If you increase the concentration of the substrate in an enzyme controlled you will speed up the chemical reaction. The reason for this is as follows: The substrate and the enzyme need to come into contact with each other for a reaction to proceed. When the two meet they join for a brief moment while the reaction is catalysed, before separating. If there are very few substrate particles in the solution, it will take time for them to bump into an enzyme molecule and therefore the reaction will be slow. 

 Also, An adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability. We can know that physical activity can bring better results when we make adequate level of physical activity by controlling one's mind or concentration. Actually according to my survey from 50 students, 42 of 05 students feel that their physical ablity is advanced or have better records when they control their mind and concentrate more.

 According to my case, when I play sports or do physical activities, I feel enhanced physical abilities and can have better scores when I calming down my mind and concentrate more than before in badminton, basketball, soccer. So I search more in physical activities not especially insports. Then, results are same. In every physical activities, I can get better score when i concentrate more. Additionally, According to my research from 50 students, 42 students feel enhanced physical ability and can get better records when they calming down and concentrate more than before.

From these we can know that controlling one's mind, condition and calming down one's mind during sport games or physical activity is very important things. That is because these behaviors can enhance physical ability and increase reaction rate, so they can get better scores. Also through these behaviors, they can control their mind stable. 

 I think Opponents who don't agree with my thoughts may say that better result and concentration or calming down are not related, they are just coincidence. However that is not realistic, just suggests. As i mentioned before, concentration cause chemical reaction to enhance reaction rate more. This means that there are relations between concentration and advanced physical advance. Additionally, I think opponents will say that concentration is just one way of mental controling and it is seemed that influence one's ability and results. However, I think concentration and calming down one's mind during sprots game are the most important way to get better results. There are many ways but these are the most influential, powerful way. 

 Until now, I mention about "Controlling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result". As i said, there are many evidences. Our body knows it, we know ourselves, result of research prove it. These are enough to prove this argument. Especially in physical activities, concentration and calming down one's mind have very important role. These are the most effective, powerful ways to make advanced results and enhanced physical ability. Already, many sports players know this and use in many matches. If you do these properly, you can get benefits from these in physical activities. Concentration and calming down one's mind is related with our brain, and control brain. So brain can control our body and make our physical abilities enhanced. These are not just coincidence. These are the results of body and brain's interaction. Thus, If you control or calm down your mind(escape from exited condition), you can cause advanced result and enhanced physical abilities.