1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:
I think I can get 1 point for my first draft.
2) What did you do well?
I think I do well in structures, and organic systems in my writing. Before I wrote this writing, I considered how to make organic structure, well-constructed writing very much.
3) What could you have done better?
I think if i use more researches, and search mor information, i could have done better. Also, If i take care grammar errors more, i could make better writing.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
I think I do the best at confirmation of classical argument. I use some examples that is based on reality and experiment, analysis to explain effectvely.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think I do the worst at The refutation and concession. I couldn't think certainly how opponents will think and rebute. So my The refutation and concession is weaker than other structures.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I concentrate on my structure to make audiences focus on my writing better. Additionally, I use some researches, experiment that are based reality.
2) What did you do well?
I think I do well in structures, and organic systems in my writing. Before I wrote this writing, I considered how to make organic structure, well-constructed writing very much.
3) What could you have done better?
I think if i use more researches, and search mor information, i could have done better. Also, If i take care grammar errors more, i could make better writing.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
I think I do the best at confirmation of classical argument. I use some examples that is based on reality and experiment, analysis to explain effectvely.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think I do the worst at The refutation and concession. I couldn't think certainly how opponents will think and rebute. So my The refutation and concession is weaker than other structures.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I concentrate on my structure to make audiences focus on my writing better. Additionally, I use some researches, experiment that are based reality.

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