Refutation and Concession

1. What is my thesis?
 Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result

2. What is the opposite position?
 Advanced result and controlling one's mind are just coincidence. There are many ways to get advanced results or enhanced physical ability in sports. That is just one kind of way.

3. What arguments can I anticipate?
a) Wether concentration can influence to human's body or not 
b) Many ways to get better reports in sports.

4. How will I counter those arguments?
 Contolling one's mind is the most effective way to get better scores and physical abilities. It is the most strong, direct way. So it is not concidence. Chemical reaction occur when we concentrate more. So It is natural that physical abilities are enhanced.


My Refutation and Concession



  Obviously my opinion is not the popular one, despite being the correct one. There are plenty of people who will dispute my thesis. Many people may have doubts that Advanced result and controlling one's mind can cause advanced result in physical activities. They will think there are there are many ways to get advanced results or enhanced physical ability in sports and Controling and calming down one's mind is just one way so that is just concidence. However there is a research that is about result of concentration. Accodring to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's research, The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater. Thus, when we concentrate bore in sports, we can get advanced physical abilities.
 Additionally opponents will have doubts that physical ability can cause advanced results. They may think they are not related. However according to wolter kluwer JOEM's research, an adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability in  workers. From these, we can know that enhanced physical abilities can cause advanced result.
 Also, opponents may think that "Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result" is just for a few people. They will think that occur to particular people. However, according to my real experiences and 42 of 50students, controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result. We can have better scores and have enhanced physical abilities during sports when we concentrate and control our condition stable.