The Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?
Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result 2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using actual instances from me and friends, a thesis that is about my thesis.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
 My argument mostly based on evidence, and real instances. My research resources contains evidences that can explain my thesis. Also my resources contain real instances about my thesis that is from 50 students.


My Confirmation

 Perhaps one of the challenges to adequately discussing this topic is the wether contolling and calming down one's mind can bring enhanced physical abilities and better records in sports. Let's talk about effect of concentration first. Concentration change many things in our body. Especially, chemical reactions occur when we concentrate. Accodring to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's research, The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater. Thus, when we concentrate bore in sports, we can get advanced physical abilities.

 

 

 According to my case, when I play sports or do physical activities, I feel enhanced physical abilities and can have better scores if i calming down my mind and concentrate more than before in badminton, basketball, soccer. So I experiment in more physical activities not especially insports. Results are same. In every physical activities, I can get better score when i concentrate more. Additionally, According to my research from 50 students, 42 students feel enhanced physical ability and can get better records when they calming down and concentrate more than before.

 Also according to one research about physical activity and results, they said an adequate level of physical activity may maintain or promote work ability in aging workers. From these, We can infer that enhanced physical activities can influence results. That can bring better results.

 

Opponents may say that  better result and concentration or calming down are not related, they are just coincidence. However that is not realistic. As i mentioned before, concentration cause chemical reaction to enhance reaction rate more. This means that there are relations between concentration and advanced physical advance. Additionally, opponents will say that concentration is just one way of  mental controling and it is seemed that influence one's ability and results. but, I think concentration or calming down one's mind during sprots game are the most important way to get better results. There are many ways but these are the most influential, powerful way.