First Draft

 Everyone who lives in the earth, may be interested in well-being and health. Also they may have concerned with physical ability and physical activity. Naturally, people are interested in how to enhance physical ability and have advanced result. Especially, in sport games, players have to enhance their physical ability and make better score. There are many ways to improve better records, but I think concentration and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced score and enhanced physical ability. Before starting, you should know the definition of word, "concentration".  Concentration on something involves giving all your attention to one thing. In other words, spend all of your concerns to it. Calming down one's mind is acting like control one's condition, state.

 Concentration during sports, physical activity can cause advanced result and enhanced physical ability. It means that players can get more score or do better in sports when they control their mind. Because concentration bring increased, enhanced rate of reactions. Accodring to STEMWiki Hyperlibrary's research, The same argument applies whether the reaction involves collision between two different particles or two of the same particle. In order for any reaction to happen, those particles must first collide. This is true whether both particles are in solution, or whether one is in solution and the other a solid. If the concentration is higher, the chances of collision are greater.

 Actually in my case, When I play sports or do physical activity, if i concentrate more or calm down my mind, i can do better and have good score because of enhanced physical ability. I research the question that is about "Controling and calming down one's mind during physical activity can cause advanced result" to 50 students. 42 of 50 students answer that they can feel enhanced physical ability when they control their mind or concentrate more. according to this survey, we know that almost people can have advanced result from controling their mind to stable condition.

 Opponents may say that  better result and concentration or calming down are not related, they are just coincidence. However that is not realistic. As i mentioned before, concentration cause chemical reaction to enhance reaction rate more. This means that there are relations between concentration and advanced physical advance. Additionally, opponents will say that concentration is just one way of  mental controling and it is seemed that influence one's ability and results. but, I think concentration or calming down one's mind during sprots game are the most important way to get better results. There are many ways but these are the most influential, powerful way.